Wednesday, October 27, 2010

YAspooktacular



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Part 2, Story 13
A SOUL LAID BARE by Lee Nichols


Our handwriting looked identical. Before I could figure out what it all meant, I was startled by a knocking sound and I turned to the library doors, expecting to see someone locked out.
I woke, my heart pounding in my chest. My arms tingled from the adrenaline running through my veins. Yeesh. Talk about anxiety dreams. I felt like Dorothy back in Kansas. As I came fully awake, I remembered what really happened.
I’d been at a Halloween party with my roommate, Alice. We’d been best friends since we’d started Boston University together and had planned to dress up as matching sexy witches for B.U.’s famous, all-campus Halloween party. But we’d had a terrible fight that afternoon. Alice accused me of coming on to her boyfriend, Dylan, who was in our Colonial History class, taught by Mr. Cooper. We had a paper due on Monday, which is what all that stuff about Mr. Cooper wanting something from me in my dream was about.
“You’ve seriously crossed the line, Sami,” Alice said. I swear I saw her eyes almost burning red with fury, before she finally got herself under control. “Roommates do not steal each other’s boyfriends.”
“I didn’t—“ I started to protest.
“I know exactly what you did,” Alice said, cutting me off. “Don’t even think of dressing up like a witch tonight.”
“Good,” I said, hurt that she’d accuse me of something I’d never do. “It’s not like I wanted to be a slutty witch anyway.”
She screamed in frustration, as she grabbed her costume and went to change in a neighbors’ room down the hall.
After that, I hadn’t felt like going out. But I’d be damned if Alice was going to stop me. Plus, I really needed the break. I been working on my paper all afternoon on the Salem witch trials. That’s how Alice and I had gotten the idea to dress up as witches. I really had checked out the book called Colonial Witchcraft. But Tonya Seller’s name hadn’t been signed out before me. Obviously, the library at B.U. was digital.
No, the Tonya Seller thread from my dream was just an urban legend that had been running around campus lately. A school librarian had disappeared one night and had never been seen or heard from again. Some people said vampires had gotten her. I was pretty sure the story got trotted out every Halloween, the details growing gorier with every retelling.
But Tonya Seller did make a killer Halloween costume. I dressed up in a silk blouse, short black skirt, the fishnets from my witch costume and kitten heels. I pulled my long dark hair into a bun and perched my reading glasses on my nose. Total sexy librarian. I made two fang marks on my neck with dark red lip gloss, grabbed a few library books and headed to the party.
Which is where Jareth comes in. My first hook-up at college. He’d approached me the minute I’d walked into the student union, as I searched for a familiar face, hoping I wouldn’t have another fight with Alice. He didn’t wear a costume, only those weird contacts that make your eyes look like an anime character—he’d chosen pure black—giving him an otherworldly look. His lines were smooth as he handed me a glass of beer. And, I don’t know, there was something so familiar and right about him, that when he leaned me against the wall and started kissing me, I hadn’t even thought of protesting. But it was almost too much, his kisses were releasing strange emotions inside of me and I broke away, making some excuse about finishing a paper.
I’d run into Alice and Dylan on the way out of the party. They’d been sucking up to Professor Cooper who was chaperoning, and had made snide comments about my costume as I’d fled to my room.
I turned on the TV, settled into an old horror film about vampires and must’ve fallen asleep and had that terrible dream.
There was that knocking again, this time for real, at my dorm room door. I crawled from bed and opened it, thinking Alice must’ve forgotten her keys.
But it was Jareth standing there, his eyes still pure black. “You forgot this,” he said. He held out the necklace from my dream. The solid-black obsidian stone, hanging from a gold chain.
I swallowed in confusion. “That’s not mine.”
“Sure it is,” he said. “You’ve just forgotten.”
I don’t know what it was about him, but I trusted him enough to let him clasp the chain around my neck. I grasped the stone firmly in my hand, and images filled my mind. In a matter of seconds, it all came rushing back. Of my training in a military unit, learning to shoot automatic weapons, throw knives, carve wooden stakes, detonate fire-bombs, and of the reprogramming, so I’d forget it all.
“Welcome back Tonya Seller.” Jareth grinned at me. “You did well.”
I was a vampire hunter, part of an elite, covert force. I’d let them strip my memory and identity from me, so I could go underground to find Alice, Dylan and Mr. Cooper. They weren’t warlocks and witches; they were vampires. And I’d been sent to kill them.
“Happy Halloween,” I said, and smiled. "Let's go get them."

35 comments:

  1. Nice!! I really liked the ending!! This was soo fun!!

    Kristen
    My Bloody Fairy Tale

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  2. Great ending and nice tying everything up!

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  3. Ok loved the ending. Everything tied up nicely with a big bow on top! Loved this story!

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  4. Wow!!! I loved it!!! Sexy librarian was a nice costume, I liked it!

    milagp1@yahoo.com.br

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  5. I absolutely LOVE this ending! Great story! :D

    fabgiada (at) gmail (dot) com

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  6. Honestly, this story surprised me time and again. I did not expect this sort of ending or any of the other twists that popped up in the other installments. Great story!!

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  7. Great twist at the end!!! Did not see that coming AT ALL. I kinda wish there were more installments, because this almost doesn't feel like an ending.

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  8. Awesome story with great ending.

    http://youcanfacetodaybecausehelives.blogspot.com/

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  9. whoa!!! didn't see that coming!! but what a great ending to a great story!!!

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  10. Whoa totally didn't expect that! But I loved the twist :)

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  11. That was a twist on top of a twist! Well done. This honestly was my favorite story.

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  12. That was so good never saw that coming. Alot of great twists That was a great story! Thank you so much that was fun :)
    tishajean@charter.net

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  13. Wow I didn't see that coming but it was a seriously nice wrap up of everything!

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  14. I liked how this tied up all the lose ends of the story quite nicely. Great story!

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  15. Well, I got my sexy librarian! nice job all.

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  16. Okay totaly didn't see any of that. I would love to see the chapter where they kick vampire behind.

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  17. Craziness!! I wish they hadn't been vampires, but I like the whole covert aspect... very awesome!

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  18. Awesome ending, love how it all tied together.

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  19. seriously?!? um...yeah...I think this one could have used a few more installments in order to have a more cohesive ending.

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  20. That ending was made of awesomeness. I knew I just had to to be patient and I would find everything out. I am so happy that I read this. It was a great halloween treat! :]

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  21. It was slightly -jerky- reading with all those twists but I really wasn't expecting the ending, and that is a GOOD thing!

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  22. I simply adore Lee Nichols!

    Happy Halloween indeed!

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  23. I have to say that this is perfect Holloween story. I really liked it. The final twist at the end just tied it all together perfectly!

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  24. Well now that was another interesting twist. I'm glad it tied everything together. Nice ending.

    jlynettes @ hotmail . com

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  25. Nice ending and a great story!!

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  26. Well done! Great way to tie everything up! Thank you Lee Nichols and everyone else!

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  27. This was great fun, I had a blast reading all the storyies! Happy Halloween!!!

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  28. Wasn't sure about this one..until the end - great way to wrap it up!

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  29. I did not see this coming but it was a great ending to an awesome story!

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  30. I love this ending! I literally laughed aloud reading the finale. So enjoyable!

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  31. great twist, so didnt expect it.
    loved how there was so many levels in the story

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